I shot my wife!!!

Well, with my 5d2 that is! lol

family shoot fell through because of weather. So she dressed up for me and we tried some shots!! I'm still so new to portraits! But, I'm trying! Shot with the 24-70mm F/2.8

She needs to smile more.
The one shot she's smiling in looks soooooo much better than the rest.

First 2 are a bit flat. See if you can make her pop more.

Good man, you did what I have only dreamed of doing haha.
I like the pose on the first pics and and the close up head shot. Looks like you are off to a good start.

These are all very good. Very sharp and good lighting. The B&W conversion though, makes her skin look too dark. Since you have image editing ok and I had a little time, I did this one: