Indian Girl - Udaipur (85mm f/1.2)

Took this in Mumbai. Comments and critiques welcome.

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There's not much you can say about this picture. The emotions from the woman and the boy add something to the picture. One thing is that it looks underexposed on the faces.

Crop out the half-person on the left would improve the photo. On my laptop it looks rather flat, nothing really "pops". Nice capture of her expression though.

I agree, image is a little flat but has potential. Turn image editing on and I'll show you a quick edit I did. Person in pink on the left is distracting and image is a little under exposed. I do like the looks on both of their faces and I do think this image has potential!

I turned it on

underexposed. ill-cropped. too much space above the head. colors should pop.

Here I did my own re-edit of it, applying what you guys have said.

Streetlight wrote in post #14086496
I turned it on

Great, this is just a quick edit but shows a bit of what could be done. Sorry for the compression... Also, did this on the laptop so colors may not be perfect...

Cheers,
Andrew

Here is a completely different crop I tried.

Streetlight wrote in post #14086634
Here I did my own re-edit of it, applying what you guys have said.

Even better with 1:1 crop.
Thank for sharing.

I love the emotion that was captured in this pic.

A bit of fill flash would have gone a long way in improving this image...