Tamir Portraits Fashion Style

First time shooting with the 85 1.2L that my friend let me borrow. Used a YN-565 in a Westcott Apollo Orb.

Please let me know what you think! (don't mind the garbage facebook quality)

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I find reddish haze in the first one & In the 2nd in the lower part of the picture, I guess that maybe due to the lens flare? Nice composition however I see the hands have been cut off at an odd place & I do like the 3rd one

I see the point about the cropped hands, but great pics nevertheless!

I like these... nice job

These are quite good

Nice set, indeed. Number 3 looks like a classic shot.

Thanks for taking the time to comment guys I appreciate it a lot!

Yes in the first and second photo any color hazing was natural with lens flare.
Also I know I know, cropped the hands but I liked the picture anyways :P

4 is your money shot . good job