Critique My Photoshoot please!

!Sorry!

I'm not an expert by any means. I like the 3rd one the best but they all seem to be a little soft and the eyes need to be sharp.

In first one for the background would have been better if the patches were cloned out & the crop is too tight, for the 2nd one I don't know if the background is working, for the 3rd the pic is a bit underexposed, would be better if the girl can be cloned out in the background not too distracting though & the 4th feel the cropping isn't right I fee there is something missing in the picture

Overall I find all the pics are kind of dull, the model looks good

Post some pics.

If you post pics instead of links, you'll get a lot more feedback.

Sorry, posted the pics now! thanks for the feedback

They look soft but that could be due to where they are hosted, but it also looks like a 8 year old did her makeup.