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Mar 26, 2012 14:49 |  #1

Harsh C&C preferred.

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Mar 26, 2012 16:03 |  #2

I don't know if I can offer "harsh" C&C. These look great. I think #3 would work better with the car towards the center or left of the frame. I do like the rubber marks on the left side, it just feels a little unbalanced.


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Mar 26, 2012 16:15 |  #3

I am not a super big fan of all the tilting, but that isn't critique as much as stylistic opinion. Like in shot #8 its just a LITTLE tilted so it just seems off to me (based on the tire barrier along the top 3rd that is)

And that's just nit picking. Like in #6 I like it a lot, but my eye is drawn to the EZ Up in the top right corner because its the brightest thing in the shot. By scrolling down I can "crop" it out and I think it helps the image.

But, like I said, nit picking, they are nice images.


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Mar 26, 2012 16:27 |  #4

autoidiodyssey wrote in post #14157558 (external link)
I don't know if I can offer "harsh" C&C. These look great. I think #3 would work better with the car towards the center or left of the frame. I do like the rubber marks on the left side, it just feels a little unbalanced.

I feel the same about that image. Something is just... off.

Thanks for the feedback!

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I am not a super big fan of all the tilting, but that isn't critique as much as stylistic opinion. Like in shot #8 its just a LITTLE tilted so it just seems off to me (based on the tire barrier along the top 3rd that is)

And that's just nit picking. Like in #6 I like it a lot, but my eye is drawn to the EZ Up in the top right corner because its the brightest thing in the shot. By scrolling down I can "crop" it out and I think it helps the image.

But, like I said, nit picking, they are nice images.

Not nitpicking at all. That kind of criticism is exactly what I am looking for. I sometimes tend to overlook the smaller details of the photos. Thank you.


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Mar 26, 2012 22:24 |  #5

I'm not liking the 3rd one either. I think going tighter would help, but the background just makes it awkward. Kinda like the AM is driving into the grass. I'd like to see the shot if you were standing in front of the Hotel/Chateau.

The R18 at night shot: The lack of focus is my biggest complaint, followed by the tilt.

Like others have mentioned you might have too much tilt going on. It works in some cases but others it's just too much, and can get to be too much. Not saying this is something you do, but I'm of the opinion that others add tilt in an attempt to add impact to a photo that is otherwise lacking. Sometimes it works but most times it doesn't.


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Mar 27, 2012 03:11 |  #6

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Mar 27, 2012 13:52 |  #7

Bicknell55 wrote in post #14159915 (external link)
I'm not liking the 3rd one either. I think going tighter would help, but the background just makes it awkward. Kinda like the AM is driving into the grass. I'd like to see the shot if you were standing in front of the Hotel/Chateau.

The R18 at night shot: The lack of focus is my biggest complaint, followed by the tilt.

Like others have mentioned you might have too much tilt going on. It works in some cases but others it's just too much, and can get to be too much. Not saying this is something you do, but I'm of the opinion that others add tilt in an attempt to add impact to a photo that is otherwise lacking. Sometimes it works but most times it doesn't.

Noted. Thank you.


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Mar 27, 2012 15:14 as a reply to  @ BAD SS's post |  #8

Also agree with the tilt comments, but love the glowing brake rotors in #1




  
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Mar 29, 2012 13:53 |  #9

Nice Pics man I was there also... Way to go BMW!!!!




  
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