It's been awhile since I've shot and posted anything on here. Any comments and critique is welcome and appreciated!
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bsaber I have no idea what's going on ![]() 3,536 posts Likes: 3 Joined Aug 2007 Location: Los Angeles, CA More info | Mar 29, 2012 13:13 | #1 It's been awhile since I've shot and posted anything on here. Any comments and critique is welcome and appreciated! 2. 3. Thanks for looking!
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drvideo Mostly Lurking ![]() 18 posts Joined Sep 2010 Location: Poway, CA More info | Mar 29, 2012 14:10 | #2 Nice shots; for me a little (very little) blemish reduction in #1 & #3. I thought the background in #2 was a bit distracting, maybe some PP to reduce contrast/sharpness ? 60D/Tam 17-50 f2.8 XR Di-II VC LD/Tam 70-200 f2.8 Di LD/Tam 60 F2 Macro/Tok 11-16 f2.8
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rick_reno Cream of the Crop 44,642 posts Likes: 134 Joined Dec 2010 More info | Mar 29, 2012 14:39 | #3 great poses, beautiful model. in 2 my eye is drawn to the book titles
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pbisfun Member 231 posts Joined Jan 2010 Location: Texas More info | Mar 29, 2012 15:51 | #4 looks like you used on camera flash they look a littel flat. the light is seen by all but not understood by all
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j-mar Member ![]() 235 posts Likes: 4 Joined Jun 2011 Location: SF Bay Area More info | Nice work and beautiful models! Really like #3. #2 would work for me too but I'm distracted by how tall she appears relative to the book case or rather the part she is sitting on. That could just be me, though. And yes the books are a little distracting. Then again nothing says sexy like SQL Server 7.0 and Analog Integrated Circuts 5D Mark II | S100
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Mar 29, 2012 20:25 | #6 they are more than head shots. Ray
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bsaber THREAD STARTER I have no idea what's going on ![]() 3,536 posts Likes: 3 Joined Aug 2007 Location: Los Angeles, CA More info | Mar 29, 2012 20:29 | #7 drvideo wrote in post #14175907 ![]() Nice shots; for me a little (very little) blemish reduction in #1 & #3. I thought the background in #2 was a bit distracting, maybe some PP to reduce contrast/sharpness ? Overall nicely posed ! rick_reno wrote in post #14176097 ![]() great poses, beautiful model. in 2 my eye is drawn to the book titles Thanks! pbisfun wrote in post #14176590 ![]() looks like you used on camera flash they look a littel flat. No on-camera flash j-mar wrote in post #14177371 ![]() Nice work and beautiful models! Really like #3. #2 would work for me too but I'm distracted by how tall she appears relative to the book case or rather the part she is sitting on. That could just be me, though. And yes the books are a little distracting. Then again nothing says sexy like SQL Server 7.0 and Analog Integrated Circuts ![]() Haha thanks! Ray Marrero wrote in post #14177895 ![]() they are more than head shots. the first one is more like a 3/4 shot. the 2nd is a full body shot. the third is close... For head shots I try to fill the frame with the head. maybe a little shoulders. Ok, so not strictly headshots
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sebr Goldmember ![]() 4,628 posts Likes: 9 Joined Jan 2007 Location: Sweden/France More info | Apr 06, 2012 16:06 | #9 I like #3 ! Sebastien
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bsaber THREAD STARTER I have no idea what's going on ![]() 3,536 posts Likes: 3 Joined Aug 2007 Location: Los Angeles, CA More info | Apr 07, 2012 14:43 | #10 |
SylvesterPotter Senior Member 673 posts Likes: 16 Joined Jan 2012 More info | Apr 08, 2012 08:38 | #11 OMG...what I could do with that first girl in front my lens...lol...hot!!
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roman_t Cream of the Crop ![]() 5,271 posts Likes: 4 Joined Mar 2005 Location: Astana, Kazakhstan More info | Apr 08, 2012 10:36 | #12 last one is lovely
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rjharris Goldmember ![]() More info | Apr 08, 2012 10:38 | #13 rick_reno wrote in post #14176097 ![]() great poses, beautiful model. in 2 my eye is drawn to the book titles What books? I don't see no stinking books.
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mjww Senior Member 675 posts Likes: 6 Joined Jul 2008 Location: Cayman Islands More info | Apr 08, 2012 10:53 | #14 I agree that the books are distracting on pic #2. Great job otherwise! Equipment list - According to the wife - "how many more lenses do you need? Yet another camera?"
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IsaiahBeiser Member 43 posts Joined Aug 2010 More info | Apr 10, 2012 01:39 | #15 |
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