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Apr 03, 2012 11:42 |  #1

I went out on March 31st to take some more photos at the pond. I followed some suggestions that I received on my original post here at the forum. I'm looking forward to hearing what you think of this version. :)

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Apr 03, 2012 11:52 |  #2
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gorgeous. i see what you are trying to do with the rail road leading line on the left, but in this situation, its best to keep it centered.


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Apr 03, 2012 12:33 |  #3

I like it the way it is, very strong image in my opinion...

Only thing I would think to do would be to clone out the crooked looking signs, poles, on the side of the tracks




  
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Apr 03, 2012 13:56 |  #4

I'll second tmoore's opinion.

I like the offset tracks...I wouldn't be able to clone out the posts, so I wouldn't try. Your skill may vary. :)


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Apr 03, 2012 14:04 |  #5

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gorgeous. i see what you are trying to do with the rail road leading line on the left, but in this situation, its best to keep it centered.

Thanks for your feedback on my post Stayhumble. The last photos I took were centered but I thought I would try something a little different this time. ;) I'll go there again when the trees start greening up.


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Apr 03, 2012 14:06 |  #6

tmoore323 wrote in post #14203256 (external link)
I like it the way it is, very strong image in my opinion...

Only thing I would think to do would be to clone out the crooked looking signs, poles, on the side of the tracks

Thanks very much Tmoore323. I'm afraid that I don't have the skills to clone those out. I would mess it up for sure. :lol:


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Apr 03, 2012 14:07 |  #7

cpam.pix wrote in post #14203693 (external link)
I'll second tmoore's opinion.

I like the offset tracks...I wouldn't be able to clone out the posts, so I wouldn't try. Your skill may vary. :)

Thanks so much for your reply Cpam. I'm not good enough to clone those out either. Maybe one of these days.


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Apr 03, 2012 18:54 |  #8

I like it, nice composition, nice light, crisp and clean with good leading lines. I wouldn't even be concerned with the crooked signs as I don't find them all that great a distraction.

Beautiful country but it looks cold. One issue is format. It's not quite 2/3


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Apr 03, 2012 20:23 |  #9

I love how the tracks help your mind wonder all the way down the image.


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Apr 03, 2012 20:39 |  #10

Wow, I have never seen a railroad track with a curve in it....well not one from where I live : )

Nice shot!


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Apr 03, 2012 20:47 |  #11

Mr.Kenmuir wrote in post #14205563 (external link)
I love how the tracks help your mind wonder all the way down the image.

This. Great leading lines.:cool: The contrast in foreground to background colors is also very nicely done. It divides your image into thirds with the yellows in the foreground, the greens in the midground, and the blues/grays in the background.


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Apr 03, 2012 21:47 |  #12

I saw the first post and really like this one. A good little spot you have there! i am not a fan of people on train track pics, but this may work..try it :)


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Apr 04, 2012 09:49 |  #13

Titus213 wrote in post #14205139 (external link)
I like it, nice composition, nice light, crisp and clean with good leading lines. I wouldn't even be concerned with the crooked signs as I don't find them all that great a distraction.

Beautiful country but it looks cold. One issue is format. It's not quite 2/3

Thanks very much for your wonderful comment Titus. :DI'm happy to hear that the crooked signs aren't too distracting. I didn't even pay attention to them until someone else mentioned it. Yes, it can get very cold here, we've had some nice weather lately but Winter isn't over just yet. Can you explain what you mean by "It's not quite 2/3"


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Apr 04, 2012 09:51 |  #14

Mr.Kenmuir wrote in post #14205563 (external link)
I love how the tracks help your mind wonder all the way down the image.

Thank you very much for your comment. I kinda like that aspect of this photo too.


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Wow, I have never seen a railroad track with a curve in it....well not one from where I live : )

Nice shot!

Thanks for taking the time to comment John. The curve in the track is the first thing I noticed so I just had to try to capture that.


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