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Apr 11, 2012 14:04 |  #1

What you think? It’s a couple of gates at a subway station that you have to swipe your ticket when leaving or entering the station.

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Apr 11, 2012 14:16 |  #2

Very cool. I might add some green color to the arrows so they pop more. They look a little green to me but could be my monitor. To the point I am not sure if you intended it or not.


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Apr 11, 2012 14:20 |  #3

i see green as well. meh.

agreed - it's cool. Nice tonality, lines, feeling of directions. Me likes.

I wonder how it would work if it the image was originally taken on an angle. Would make it more abstract and more of an art piece.


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Apr 11, 2012 14:20 |  #4

They are indeed green in the picture, will make them more greener so they pop out more.


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Apr 11, 2012 17:28 |  #5

I really like this image, I feel like some of the bottom of the frame could be cropped out but overall it is a very still-life image. very crisp! and great use of color for the subject. Well exposed and well done. I like the subtle green value Vs. the vibrant green everyone wants to see. If you saturate the arrows more... only saturate like 1% or 2% from what we are seeing.




  
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Apr 11, 2012 18:02 |  #6

StaticMedia wrote in post #14249752 (external link)
I really like this image, I feel like some of the bottom of the frame could be cropped out but overall it is a very still-life image. very crisp! and great use of color for the subject. Well exposed and well done. I like the subtle green value Vs. the vibrant green everyone wants to see. If you saturate the arrows more... only saturate like 1% or 2% from what we are seeing.

i agree maybe add a little more darkness to the left hand corner


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Apr 11, 2012 18:33 |  #7

I like it too. It has a futuristic feel to it. To make the floor more consistent you might brighten the dark diagonal in the lower left corner and brighten that corner floor.


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