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Apr 23, 2012 09:47 | #1

Please CC my composition and lighting. Any other feedback is appreciated. Thanks

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Apr 23, 2012 09:50 | #2

I like the composition, although the vignetting is a bit extreme, and the overall photo is too dark for my taste.

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May 01, 2012 10:53 | #3

I like dark photos... and I think the composition is nice. Wish it were a real flower though

I agree, the vignetting is pretty intense.

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May 01, 2012 10:56 | #4

I think it is a real flower. It looks like it grew through the crack between the boards.

Apart from the vignette, which is a personal thing, the flower is facing (yes, flowers have faces) to the left and you gave it little room on that side compared to all that dead space on the right.

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May 02, 2012 10:48 as a reply to @ joedlh's post | #5

It was actually a fake flower that I placed. I also agree that the vignetting was too much. Thanks for all your comments, sooo much appreciated.

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