A Couple of Weddings Snaps From this Past Weekend -- Weddings & Other Family Events in photography-on-the.net forums

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Apr 27, 2012 11:22 | #1

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Apr 27, 2012 15:05 | #2

Great set! Just a few thoughts...

1) Not a fan of the framing on this one. It also feels a little... hokey. Such a beautiful setting and I just sort of feel you went a little too corny fairy tale on it. Also the groom is almost getting cut off.

2) Like it, but again not a fan of the framing. I'd rather see more sky and less sidewalk.

3) I don't really care for the vignette. Framing is good on this one, but I'd love to see it pulled back a bit with more of the trees in the background. Also, I would have had the groom but his left hand on the brides waste. It would look more intimate. As it is now he just looks really awkward and uncomfortable.

4) Again, awkward framing. I'd love to have this shot pull back and get both doors in frame with either both doors completely open or both closed the same amount. As it is right now the door on the left is cut off and the door on the right is very distracting from the bride.

Were you a primary or second shooter on this wedding?

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Apr 27, 2012 16:07 | #3

Are you looking for critique?

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