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May 01, 2012 22:01 |  #1

please give me some feedback, i have not done much landscape/nature photography but i had a chance this weekend.

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May 02, 2012 09:33 |  #2

#1 has a very slight right tilt and lacks a compelling subject.
#2 likewise needs something to draw interest.
You might experiment with some extreme processing of saturation, color shifting, b&w, etc.


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May 02, 2012 12:03 |  #3

There's a lot that's not in focus in the first one. When shooting a landscape like this with great depth, you need a narrow aperture in order to maximize the depth of field. You did not include the exif information, so we can't tell what your settings were. There might be movement blur too. Or maybe your lens is not of great quality. I can't find any part that's really sharp.

To get any meaningful critique, you need to post the photo, camera, and lens data.


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