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May 04, 2012 12:53 |  #1

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May 04, 2012 13:07 |  #2

Nice! I like this one a lot. Great use of horizon and contrast. Well done!




  
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May 04, 2012 14:37 |  #3

There is a little lens distortion on the building. Looks a tad oversharpened and underexposed. I The beach and shoreline look nice. I think I would have opted to crop out everything left of the grassline and made it a beach shot. Thx for posting!


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May 04, 2012 14:50 |  #4

Love the colors and line of the beach leading off into the distance. I like the over-sharpened look for this photo.


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May 04, 2012 15:27 |  #5

RACINGHART03 wrote in post #14379868 (external link)
There is a little lens distortion on the building. Looks a tad oversharpened and underexposed. I The beach and shoreline look nice. I think I would have opted to crop out everything left of the grassline and made it a beach shot. Thx for posting!

I was kinda thinking the same. I was holding up paper to the image here at work trying to visualize a crop. I think it might be neat to crop it at the center of the condo. cutting the condo in half. this way you are removing the left side that is a but confusing (other than the nice sky there) and keeping that island of landscaping that meets the blacktop in the bottom foreground.




  
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May 04, 2012 17:24 |  #6

Thanks for the comments everyone! The idea was to show the contrast between the city (underexposed) and the ocean (brighter and sharpened). This may not have worked out all that well :)




  
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May 04, 2012 17:45 |  #7

rioni wrote in post #14380626 (external link)
Thanks for the comments everyone! The idea was to show the contrast between the city (underexposed) and the ocean (brighter and sharpened). This may not have worked out all that well :)

I get what you are saying. The sky above the city portion is Great! My visual mind is having an argument. But the landscape below is lacking. Partially due to the sunlight but also due to the geometry. Still a great photo though.




  
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May 04, 2012 22:07 |  #8

Aside from the slight tilt of the building it is a wonderful shot.




  
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