i've some things i don't like about this image which perhaps i won't mention up front. i welcome any suggestions on how i could process or frame this better. any suggestions welcome, thanks!
Moooney Senior Member  641 posts Likes: 7 Joined Feb 2009 More info | May 04, 2012 18:03 | #1 i've some things i don't like about this image which perhaps i won't mention up front. i welcome any suggestions on how i could process or frame this better. any suggestions welcome, thanks! 5dmk ii / 35mm f/1.4 L / Σ 85mm f/1.4 / 135mm f/2 L / 430 EX II flickr
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May 04, 2012 18:23 | #2 I'd probably crop off the top 1/3rd of the pic. I do like the image, though I think the composition would have been better if you had shot it at a slight angle, either from the left aiming towards her face, or the right aiming towards the art. With the impending forum closure, please consider joining the unofficial adjunct to the POTN forum, The POTN Forum Facebook Group
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May 04, 2012 18:47 | #3 i completely agree on both counts. for some reason when i processed these images i decided to lock the aspect ratio for crops - something i don't generally do. 5dmk ii / 35mm f/1.4 L / Σ 85mm f/1.4 / 135mm f/2 L / 430 EX II flickr
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NumLock Member 59 posts Joined Feb 2011 Location: Australia More info | May 04, 2012 22:11 | #4 I like that the painter is clearly the subject but there is a tantalizing glimpse of the portrait she is painting.
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May 05, 2012 00:33 | #5 she's painting johnny cash. and she is looking up, to a picture of him off cam. i think this is originally why i left the negative space. a tighter crop would more clearly show her look upwards, out of frame. 5dmk ii / 35mm f/1.4 L / Σ 85mm f/1.4 / 135mm f/2 L / 430 EX II flickr
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May 05, 2012 01:56 | #6 I'd clone our completely or darken the blue light which is behind her. -- Image Editing OK --
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