First Wedding NEED CRITIQUE!

great job. enjoyed the pictures. people are critiquing it cause you have potential to make awesome shots. I really like the composition in most of your shots. just a few minor things i feel


The flower on the hood does not do it for me, it's quite distracting.


#3, the groom is too blured out it hurts my eyes and he looks stiff. maybe left hand in his pocket? and a leg out slightly?

i really like #4. would be cool if you position the side mirror to reflect them kissing.

#5 he should be sitting up a bit higher instead of slouching down and looking up. looks awkward. and looking deeply into each others eyes. that would give it a little romance with the picnic

The original PP does the photos most justice. Just because someone doesnt like the PP dont mean its bad, Show them to the client and if they love it thats all that matters!

Woops, the quality of the pics in the startpost are very bad in quality indeed. I blame Tinypic for that.

Some of them are a bit soft indeed. I used a 50F1.4 for them. I never had that lens on my camera so there was no MA possible. And I used F1.4 on the the most pics. Picture 4 was taken with my 24-70 I saw directly IQ difference. Thanks for the feedback all!

I am struggeling with the PP sometimes. Here are some pics of my second shoot. I like those pics much better already.

IMAGE LINK: http://www.flickr.com/​photos/merijn89/715693​0585/

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I don't mind the PP and the compositions. Most of the images though seem to lack a focus point, but that could be from resizing them for the website. Photobucket does that on me. Great job on the style and design.