where the S connects to the D, is what makes it look like a B.
I see it now...I tried to have it disconnected but it looked way too busy n not streamlined enough..hmm maybe I should have had it separated 
MomentsMedia Senior Member 367 posts Joined Jan 2011 Location: Toronto, Canada More info | Apr 24, 2011 12:49 | #3286 Chippy569 wrote in post #12282337 where the S connects to the D, is what makes it look like a B. I see it now...I tried to have it disconnected but it looked way too busy n not streamlined enough..hmm maybe I should have had it separated Moments {Photo + Cinema}
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MichaelSchoelen Senior Member 614 posts Likes: 1 Joined Jul 2008 Location: Fair Oaks Ranch, CA More info | On your next card maybe try not to have that top bulge. I like the top connecting line, but the extra bulge up top makes it look like a B. Just smoothly curve it all the way around for a better looking D. Michael Schoelen
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HappySnapper90 Cream of the Crop 5,145 posts Likes: 3 Joined Aug 2008 Location: Cleveland, Ohio More info | Apr 25, 2011 10:59 | #3288 NG8JGFX wrote in post #12276359 Heres mine... Overall.. too busy. Text and graphics everywhere. Consider having a different card for your different endeavors. If photography is a business endeavor, why have 2 websites listed? You may be giving people too much information and confusing them in the process.
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HappySnapper90 Cream of the Crop 5,145 posts Likes: 3 Joined Aug 2008 Location: Cleveland, Ohio More info | Apr 25, 2011 11:02 | #3289 Text in places seems a bit bigger than I think it should be for a good design. And I don't see a need to list "photographer" on the card when it's already saying "photography" in a few places. Michael Schoelen wrote in post #12277522
When I saw this I thought it was SAAB, until I saw this... ![]()
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MomentsMedia Senior Member 367 posts Joined Jan 2011 Location: Toronto, Canada More info | Apr 25, 2011 15:37 | #3290 HappySnapper90 wrote in post #12288841 Text in places seems a bit bigger than I think it should be for a good design. And I don't see a need to list "photographer" on the card when it's already saying "photography" in a few places. Thank you for the feedback. One of the most common comments I see people getting here is "Your font is too small, your font is too unreadable". I tried to make it as easy to read as possible. Noted on the "Photographer". Moments {Photo + Cinema}
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SillyGuy Senior Member 929 posts Likes: 3 Joined Apr 2008 Location: Sunny So Cal! More info | Apr 26, 2011 03:56 | #3291 my card....what do you guys think?
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designerob Hatchling 2 posts Joined Apr 2011 More info | Apr 26, 2011 15:08 | #3292
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JCOphoto Member 192 posts Joined Aug 2010 Location: Portland More info | Apr 26, 2011 16:23 | #3293 SillyGuy wrote in post #12294165 my card....what do you guys think?
Have you done a test print? The font is pretty tiny, and might be hard to read. ~ Jessica O || Portland, OR Photographer
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ipood Senior Member 306 posts Joined Feb 2006 Location: Washington More info | Apr 26, 2011 16:37 | #3294 designerob wrote in post #12297321
i was confused the first 3 times i looked at it but then i got it. foto.
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Eileen Member 176 posts Joined Aug 2007 Location: California More info | Apr 26, 2011 19:49 | #3295 SillyGuy wrote in post #12294165 my card....what do you guys think?
I like the logo monogram, the rest of the layout seems like the photos might be a little small, as well as the text as someone mentioned. It would be a nice poster or marketing flyer though. Graphic Designer / Photographer
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kaylie_kipe Hatchling 5 posts Joined Apr 2011 More info | Apr 26, 2011 22:53 | #3296 Oh my! This thread led me to moo.com and I am now going to make some freaking awesome business cards! I will let you know when they are ready for critiquing. Seattle Wedding and Portrait Photography
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dwprint Member 34 posts Joined Apr 2011 Location: Leeds UK More info | Hello everyone www.davidwardprinting.co.uk
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AdamJones Goldmember 1,649 posts Likes: 60 Joined Aug 2009 Location: Davis, CA More info | Apr 27, 2011 12:28 | #3298 That's some clever marketing. Anthony | Flickr
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SillyGuy Senior Member 929 posts Likes: 3 Joined Apr 2008 Location: Sunny So Cal! More info | Apr 27, 2011 15:00 | #3299 Eileen wrote in post #12298902 I like the logo monogram, the rest of the layout seems like the photos might be a little small, as well as the text as someone mentioned. It would be a nice poster or marketing flyer though. thx..i did a run of test prints - friend owns a print shop..font is smaller but is pretty easy to read.
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Chris. Member 73 posts Likes: 1 Joined Jul 2009 Location: Riverside CA More info | Apr 27, 2011 15:56 | #3300 This is a card that I just designed, It has not been printed yet but I will be getting it printed by moo sometime soon. Also I'm still debating weather I wanna go with the standard size or moo mini cards. Please share your thoughts.
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