First time senior shoot C&C

thanks!
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Composition just isnt doing aything for me, #5 looks like he is about to drop a deuce. Face is overexposed in many of them...keep trying though..

Like 2 to 6

#3 is my fave. He looks the most relaxed in that one. Maybe would have tried to move the tree in the background a little more from behind him. Keep going.

thanks for the feedback, it's much appreciated.

6 i dont like the rock in front of his legs
7 is too far
8 i dont like the overhead fisheye look for a portrait
3 and 4 are the most successful