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Jun 03, 2012 14:22 |  #1

C&C Please

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Jun 03, 2012 15:21 |  #2

I think this would be improved with a tighter crop. This is a symmetrical subject, so there's nothing wrong with centering it. The stuff on the sides does not contribute to the image. There's also an impression that the scene is not level to the horizon. You also don't need all that sky.


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Jun 03, 2012 23:28 |  #3

slide the moon closer to the stadium then crop and loose some of the sky above the moon


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Jun 03, 2012 23:42 |  #4

something like this

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Jun 03, 2012 23:45 |  #5

and before you say it yes there should have been a reflection of the moon in the water in a lighter shade of white....


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Jun 05, 2012 01:16 |  #6

Thanks joedlh and stanclark for your input, your points definitely make sense and are noted!




  
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