First attempt at making a film with 5D Mark III

This is my first attempt so I know there are areas to improve. The photos is in low quality but will be replaced with higher quality later this week so try and look past that.

The film is a smal advertisment for a danish photographer so the speak is in danish.

Lens used was 70-200 f/2.8L, and microphone used was Canon WM-V1.

Edited with Adobe Premiere Pro, royalty free music created with SonicFire Pro 5.

http://www.youtube.com​/watch?v=lmU2px6dyrg

- audio mix is rough.
- I have no idea what I am watching until halfway in (that is unless what she is saying explains it).
- There's no reason to have 30 seconds of her shooting the ocean for no reason. A cut away of a close up of her would work her.
- The whole promo should be half as long.
- The end call to action looks horrible laid over plain black and left justified.