Second E-session under my belt

Just starting editing them and here were a couple I came across I liked so far. Tons more to go through.

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How would the 2nd one look in B&W? Just curious.

like the 2nd shot, his arms crossed in 1 isn't good body language

Thanks for the feedback guys.

As requested here is the 2nd one in B&W with a dash of sepia (my taste)

Here is my first official ring shot too.

Love the photos! You seem to have a great connection with the couple.

My only critique would be about your logo - I find the font more appropriate for children's photos than engagement or weddings. Just my 0.02.

Nice photos! good exposure.
On your first photo, i would clone out the little branch leaves or crop it out and also clone out the white lines and all that oil thats on the ground.

Thanks guys. Yes I know my logo needs to be re-done. Im not very good at logos. Any tips for one?

Try just changing the font for your logo.
Great idea/location for the first image.

these are ok. nothing artistic. but good for just starting out

crop in more on the brick wall. why do you show all that brick? is their a reason? these are questions to ask yourself while composing for shots.

your ring shot has front focus. it could be focus is off on the lens, but chances are you half pressed, then composed at a different area, thus moving your focal plane.

play with every slider possible on your editing program. i still mess with mine and learn every time about how much it can change a photo.

her hair at the top bothers me on the 2nd image. They are both very plain shots, you could do a lot more with them given the urban location

I'd talk to your clients about clothing choices before you shoot next time.