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Jun 15, 2012 00:10 |  #1

Just starting editing them and here were a couple I came across I liked so far. Tons more to go through.

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Jun 15, 2012 01:01 |  #2

How would the 2nd one look in B&W? Just curious.


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Jun 15, 2012 09:07 |  #3

like the 2nd shot, his arms crossed in 1 isn't good body language




  
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Jun 15, 2012 21:01 |  #4

Thanks for the feedback guys.

As requested here is the 2nd one in B&W with a dash of sepia (my taste)

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Jun 15, 2012 21:02 |  #5

Here is my first official ring shot too.

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Jun 15, 2012 22:29 |  #6

Love the photos! You seem to have a great connection with the couple.

My only critique would be about your logo - I find the font more appropriate for children's photos than engagement or weddings. Just my 0.02.


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Jun 15, 2012 22:40 |  #7

Nice photos! good exposure.
On your first photo, i would clone out the little branch leaves or crop it out and also clone out the white lines and all that oil thats on the ground.


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Jun 15, 2012 23:15 |  #8

Thanks guys. Yes I know my logo needs to be re-done. Im not very good at logos. Any tips for one?


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Jun 15, 2012 23:30 |  #9

Try just changing the font for your logo.
Great idea/location for the first image.




  
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Jun 15, 2012 23:49 |  #10
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these are ok. nothing artistic. but good for just starting out

crop in more on the brick wall. why do you show all that brick? is their a reason? these are questions to ask yourself while composing for shots.

your ring shot has front focus. it could be focus is off on the lens, but chances are you half pressed, then composed at a different area, thus moving your focal plane.

play with every slider possible on your editing program. i still mess with mine and learn every time about how much it can change a photo.


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Jun 16, 2012 00:28 as a reply to  @ stayhumble's post |  #11

her hair at the top bothers me on the 2nd image. They are both very plain shots, you could do a lot more with them given the urban location

I'd talk to your clients about clothing choices before you shoot next time.


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