MikePanic Goldmember 1,639 posts Likes: 1 Joined Jan 2005 Location: pa More info | Jun 24, 2012 17:41 | #1 Really digging this tight portrait from a recent shoot with Christine.  5d2, 100mm f/2, 5' octabox to camera right, post in LR3 with Nik Silver EFEX Pro b&w and the PS for OnOne skin smoothing and sharpening. Comment, critique, questions always welcome. Full set from her shoot is here: http://www.mikepanic.com/christine/  all photos on my site click to open bigger.MikePanic.com
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Point-n-shoot-n Goldmember 2,037 posts Likes: 1127 Joined Jun 2008 Location: Tampa, Florida More info | Jun 24, 2012 19:51 | #2 I like the feel of the shot....but I would like to see more of her exposed eye. The camera right side of her face looks a little hot as well. The pic would also benefit from a couple clicks of the spot healing brush to clear up some minor blemishes on the camera left side of her cheek and chin. Nice model and crop! Canon 5D mk IV, Canon 5D mk iii, Canon 5d classic, Rebel XTI 400D 18-55 kit lens, Canon EF 85mm 1:1.8, Canon EF 17-40 F4L, Quantaray 70-300 1:4-5.6 LD, Canon 70-200 F2.8 iiL, Canon EF135 F2 L, Canon 200 F2 L, Tamron 28-75 1:2.8 , 2 alien bee 800's, 430 EXii, 580 EXii, rectangular and octo softboxes, assorted umbrellas, portable backdrops, radio triggers and still adding.............
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Heath Goldmember  2,332 posts Joined Sep 2009 Location: NYC, NY More info | Jun 24, 2012 19:52 | #3 I would remove the single hair that is on her nose and I would like to see more of her left eye. I think it is the shadow to the right of her nose that bothers me with the lighting, but something seems slightly off. Heath
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DavidFaltus Member  50 posts Joined Mar 2012 Location: South of Atlanta Ga. More info | Jun 25, 2012 18:17 | #4 I agree, remove the hair from the eye and the nose. Otherwise great shot. 40D / EF-S 18-55 / EF-S 55-250 (and growing)
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Jun 25, 2012 19:03 | #5 Does she have her right eye closed? It seems to be pulling up the corner of her mouth giving it an uneven appearance. A bunch of stuff.
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