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Jun 25, 2012 19:50 |  #1

Her are a couple shots of my little princess. I would appreciate any comments or critiques.

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Jun 25, 2012 20:05 |  #2

No critique on the photography here, I can only confirm she does look like a Princess....:D


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Jun 25, 2012 21:00 |  #3

Number one looks spot on for color and exposure! Great job. One could hope for a better expression but kids are pretty much impossible. ;)

The second one could use more contrast in my opinion. How did you convert it to black and white?


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Jun 25, 2012 21:24 |  #4

Thanks for the comment.

I use lightroom to convert the RAW file to B&W.

As far as expressions, with a two year old, getting them to stand still long enough to capture any expression is a victory.:)




  
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Jun 25, 2012 21:28 |  #5

I wanted to add one.

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Jun 25, 2012 21:32 |  #6

jpburke wrote in post #14631640 (external link)
Thanks for the comment.

I use lightroom to convert the RAW file to B&W.

As far as expressions, with a two year old, getting them to stand still long enough to capture any expression is a victory.:)

I totally agree! Did you use a lightroom preset? Do you mind if I post an edit of it?


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Jun 25, 2012 21:45 |  #7

JakAHearts wrote in post #14631686 (external link)
I totally agree! Did you use a lightroom preset? Do you mind if I post an edit of it?

I did not use a presest. Using LR3, I did my normal post processing adjustments(sharpening​m exposure, saturation, etc.), clicked the black and white button and bumped up the contrast. I also added a little vignetting.

Please do. I would be interested to see your edit.




  
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Jun 25, 2012 21:53 |  #8

Here ya go. The vignette is a bit strong now but I couldnt get rid of it easily.

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Jun 25, 2012 22:04 as a reply to  @ JakAHearts's post |  #9

Looks nice. Did you just bump up the contrast?

It looks like you ride the line of going too dark with the shadows.Especially in the hair. I need to get more confident with that. This edit would look great printed.




  
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Jun 25, 2012 22:12 |  #10

I used a gradient map in photoshop and then adjusted the black and white points until I liked it. It might be a bit too dark now that I look again. Its so easy to go too far.


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