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Jun 30, 2012 21:53 |  #1

Tried to shoot my niece and nephew in the surf. This is at the famed Jersey Shore, where the water is a sort of greenish, brownish gray color. Shot with a 40D and 28-105 w/CP. Appreciate any feedback.

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Tried a LR preset on this one. The figure in the distance is her big brother.
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Jun 30, 2012 22:13 |  #2

Number 1 is a bit soft but the expression on their face is priceless. Great shot!


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Jun 30, 2012 23:03 as a reply to  @ cgen1's post |  #3

I see her left hand is in focus, but they are not? If you could also include your EXIF, it sure helps in deciding what could be done differently;) Second, not digging the processing...the contrast seems hard? Looks like they had a blast though:cool:


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Jul 01, 2012 05:42 |  #4

Totally a subjective matter, I guess, but - white vignette - no no!


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