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Jul 14, 2012 13:37 | #1

Here's some artistic meddling that I did on a recent shot from Great South Bay. The vessel, Ganymede out of Sayville, LI, is a gaff-rigged schooner, being single-handed by a skipper who was texting at the time (boo!). What do you think?

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Jul 14, 2012 13:39 | #2

Beautiful!...That B&W with toning is just right...Love it.

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Jul 14, 2012 13:44 | #3

I like it a lot. The only thing that I can suggest that may work a little better is to allow a little more room in front of the schooner and a little less behind it.

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Jul 14, 2012 13:59 | #4

Very Nice!!

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Jul 14, 2012 18:51 | #5

I like the idea; but I don't like the tonal banding on the sails. If you could smooth out the banding and maybe increase the toning I think it would be better.
EDIT: and you might clone out that white thing below the bowsprit.

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