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Jul 18, 2012 08:54 |  #1

Hello,
This is a few shots from my 3rd solo wedding... I have about 15 weddings second shooting under my belt, but still trying to fully grasp the main photog role.

Please tell me what you think.

Thanks,

Joe

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Jul 18, 2012 16:22 |  #2

nice work Joe, really like 3 and 4




  
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Jul 18, 2012 18:36 |  #3

Excellent...




  
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Jul 18, 2012 19:17 |  #4

I like all of them except #7 (last one).


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Jul 18, 2012 23:40 |  #5

careful its easy to overdue the vignettes in every shot


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Jul 19, 2012 10:59 |  #6

1-I like this
2-it looks like you weren't paying attention to the background here--probably could have easily shifted and found another--the green might have been good, but splitting up the frame with the backround doesn't quite work here in my opinion
3-Too much vignette
4-Skin tones too cool; too much vignette; the sky was bland so why not get high, shoot down on them so the grass is background ?
5-Skin tones seem a little off on the cool side--but it's a decent shot
6-Brides should be the subject, the focus of most shots in which she is depicted. I'd be careful about letting effects like this get in the way of us seeing the lovely bride.
7-Too much light, too wide open. I would have stopped down my aperture to put everything a stop or two underexposed then filled the couple (foreground) with flash. Also--too much vignette (which almost never looks good on a high key image)



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Jul 19, 2012 11:02 |  #7

Too much vignette. Posing is a bit repetitive and frames slightly boring.

Skin tones look off as mentioned.




  
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