MY FIRST WEDDING SHOOT

My first wedding shoot for my friend.

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Are you open to critique ?

yes, i'm a beginner so please

I love #3. Im not a fan of the white vignette on the first one. Cool idea though

Great.
1-Funny idea. I think the shot would have worked better with more sky (to subtly put us in mind of flying, levitating); and I think the white vignette clashes, because normally I see the white vignette look applied to more formal, less comical images.
2-I usually consider it a kind of wedding sin to cut off the Bride's dress in this way. Aside from closer crops (waist up for example), I normally consider the dress an extension of her and try not to cut it off at least for posed shots (I often make the mistake though !). I like what you have done in framing her with the tree arching over her. The next time you shoot something like this, I'd recommend trying to expose as you have then add an off-cam flash to light her up. I wish she popped a little more in this image; this method would help achieve that.
3-Nice. I like this. Biggest thing holding it back in my mind is color balance. Hopefully you shot in RAW; I'd recommend making the image far more warm (so in the direction of yellow).

thank you for your critiques chris. i will keep those in mind for next time =)

I love #3 and here is a really quick edit i did let me know what you think

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dang, i like this better =) awesome

aaron_400d wrote in post #14806056
I love #3 and here is a really quick edit i did let me know what you think

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Aaron, just a note that the user should have Image Editing OK before editing their photos. But great job on the edit.

frugivore wrote in post #14806530
Aaron, just a note that the user should have Image Editing OK before editing their photos. But great job on the edit.

Fair call mate i hope they didnt mind was only trying to help out. I loved the shot but to me it needed a little something

np, i didn't mind anyways =)

aaron_400d wrote in post #14807581
Fair call mate i hope they didnt mind was only trying to help out. I loved the shot but to me it needed a little something

frugivore wrote in post #14806530
Aaron, just a note that the user should have Image Editing OK before editing their photos. But great job on the edit.

how will you know if the OP oks image editing?

Edit works nice ^^^ you live & learn, wake up to do another shoot

can i join the editing just to give you other idea?

here's my version..

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vinmunoz wrote in post #14811852
how will you know if the OP oks image editing?

In the User CP under 'edit Profile' the person can select to Ok image editing and it shows under their name on their post.