i made a video of me trying to be funny (feedback welcome)

http://www.youtube.com …=KNxWlBkmR7Q&fe​ature=plcp

i was bored and decieded to make a youtube video. i am a newbie so i hope i am posting in the correct area.

thoughts, comments, advice, subscibers appreciated

it was a little slow but I found it funny. Good job

That blue wall would have made a better background without the white cord and outlet in the shot. And get an outlet cover on that one in the dance shots before you shock the hell out of yourself!

The point I'm trying to make is this: Those seem like nit picking comments, but stuff like that, simple things to fix are just that, way simple to fix, but very distracting to viewers. I understand you don't have a huge amount of room to shoot stuff like that, but your setup, confessional type shot was very, very good except for that outlet and cord in it. I loved the colors and contrast of the shot. Simple things, yes, but important.

And like Mike said, pick up the pace. It moved a little slow, some quicker edits would have helped a lot. Otherwise, a good first effort!

lol for some reason this came to mind: http://youtu.be/GEFj0P​ngu_E

OK, that was funny StaticMedia! Fairly inpropriate, but funny.

ChasWG wrote in post #14882748
That blue wall would have made a better background without the white cord and outlet in the shot. And get an outlet cover on that one in the dance shots before you shock the hell out of yourself!......

Absolutely!

Can't say it made me laugh but took some balls to pull off. Some nice editing in there and a few unnecessary residual cuts but, on the whole, if it made you happy....

lol at the Dougie

thank you everyone ill take what you all said into consideration