Staying in bed

What do you think?

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like the concept not the execution

cropped too tight.... blown whites...dirty table...and clock

What happens if you turn the clock around and take the picture from behind the guy?
My clock faces me when I'm in bed.
What's the story about why it's back faces him?

what happens if you focus on the guy rather than the clock. anyone in the modern word knows the pain of getting up for work.

The pain should be in his face not the clock.

stanclark wrote in post #14880311
like the concept not the execution

cropped too tight.... blown whites...dirty table...and clock

Amen. Highlights lead you away from the clock in which the photographs main purpose is. Reshoot.

that could be me! hahaha.

dave

As for the photo, I'm kind of like the rest.
I like the fact that you even thought of this. I have a hard time coming up with ideas.

It better than any black and white I have ever done. The dirty table is distracting though. I don't have a problem with the whites being blown out, I feel it adds an element to the picture.