Some photos for CC

Thinking about putting theses into my portfolio:

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trash the soccer shot doesn't look right looks like the ball was photo shopped in
trash the last shot cropped too tight
I would say yes too the rest

Being able to self-evaluate your work is an important skill to develop. My litmus test is, can you imagine them hanging in a gallery.

i actually liked the soccer shot... did that ball actually smack her in the head? lol The look on the girl behind her's face is "oh yeah thats going to hurt"

I agree the soccer one looks good, and I'd keep it. I'm not too keen on the first one though. I know it's a storm chaser, but I don't know if the general populous will get it, in which case it looks like a guy in a car with a GPS/computer. Technically, the image looks good, it's the subject that I question.

Number 6 has been sharpened too much and the hats have a black line/haze above them, I would toned down the overall sharpening and create a mask in Photoshop so you can preserve the hats but still sharpen the face. Hope that helps

stephanielaurenphotogr​aph wrote in post #14891965
Number 6 has been sharpened too much and the hats have a black line/haze above them, I would toned down the overall sharpening and create a mask in Photoshop so you can preserve the hats but still sharpen the face. Hope that helps

Yea, not sure what happened with #6. I think I'm going to have 2 portfolios. One for sports and one for journalism like storm chasing/news

KirkS518 wrote in post #14891883
I agree the soccer one looks good, and I'd keep it. I'm not too keen on the first one though. I know it's a storm chaser, but I don't know if the general populous will get it, in which case it looks like a guy in a car with a GPS/computer. Technically, the image looks good, it's the subject that I question.

I agree with this. The first photo is my least favorite. The sports/action shots are better.

4 and 6 need to go

might add that theses are not my only images for the portfolio:
My current portfolio is here:
http://photographybyda​vidson.com/portfolio

4 should go
3 has some highlight overexposure which could be remedied with shadows and highlights, brightness, contrast, and levels. There is also a slight yellow cast to the white uniforms.
I could post an edit if you like me to.

#1, 3 & 4 are porfolio worthy.

Liquid Dark wrote in post #14899312
4 should go
3 has some highlight overexposure which could be remedied with shadows and highlights, brightness, contrast, and levels. There is also a slight yellow cast to the white uniforms.
I could post an edit if you like me to.

Yea, sure

BLD_007 wrote in post #14899441
Yea, sure

here is an edit of the football image. thanks for letting me try it. hope you like.