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Aug 25, 2012 01:53 |  #1

please opine on this bird image

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Aug 25, 2012 04:32 |  #2

Nice composition. On my laptop screen it looks like it needs a boost in brightness by about 30% though.


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Aug 25, 2012 06:52 as a reply to  @ Qbx's post |  #3

Your indeed correct...it occurred during download...this is how it outta be

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Aug 25, 2012 07:13 |  #4

I love it, talk about right place, right time! Nice capture. I don't see any issues with, the second image.


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Aug 25, 2012 08:31 as a reply to  @ Northwoods Bill's post |  #5

I like the composition but the light seems a bit harsh. It may be a matter of taste but I also think the shot looks a bit warm.

Here's a quick edit where I reduced the clarity a bit and cooled the white balance of your first posted image.

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Aug 25, 2012 09:36 |  #6

Use a polarized filter next time. The image is great but those reflections on the water are way too busy IMO.


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Aug 26, 2012 21:48 as a reply to  @ erikfig's post |  #7

Nice family portrait, one with it's head under water and one playing with Mom with the piece of grass....smile worthy. I like Gene's edit or maybe somewhere in between, either way I'd print one.


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Aug 27, 2012 10:27 as a reply to  @ Starks's post |  #8

This is a re-edit taking some of your advice...applied a photoshop polarized filter and changed the WB somewhat

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differences aren't subtle...

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