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Aug 30, 2012 19:35 |  #1

I had posted a shot from the Greenwood Lake airshow this year on my site. I just redid this one in Lightroom, btw Im liking LR4


This was CS5 with Rendering clouds(which I hated)

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After LR4, I love the adjustment brush thingy

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Aug 30, 2012 19:43 |  #2

I think the logo over the picture is extremely distracting.




  
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Aug 30, 2012 20:05 as a reply to  @ rioni's post |  #3

Thats from my Smugmug watermark


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Aug 31, 2012 10:45 |  #4

I hate to say this, but I think the first is better. The colors clash in the second. I would tone down the sky.


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Aug 31, 2012 11:34 as a reply to  @ joedlh's post |  #5

^^^ i agree as well i like the first alot better maybe just add some vibrance to the pic and bit contrast and you should be golden


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Aug 31, 2012 12:23 |  #6

Im a plane fan so love it.....do you have any more.

Of the two, the first is more pleasing to me


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Aug 31, 2012 19:51 as a reply to  @ stillinamerica's post |  #7

Wow, personally I thought the 1st one looked cheesy with the fake cloud. I believe the plane in the 2nd is better representation of the plane in real life.

I do have some other shots on the website, plus a few hundred more on my PC I need to work on still
I had these I posted in the forums for ideas

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and the really cheesy one
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Sep 01, 2012 22:07 |  #8

Yeah the second looks like a die cast toy image....some people like that I kinda do, maybe the sky is too blue in that one. air shows are fun!


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