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Sep 04, 2012 15:11 |  #16

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I appreciate your opinion. Any suggestions?

What software did you use for the HDR? I've used Photomatix in the past, but find myself having to really tone down a lot of the sliders because I get halos as well as an "over-processed" look.

Not sure if you have photoshop, but I recently started using the manual blending technique with luminosity layers and I like the look a lot better.

Let me know if you have photoshop and I can post the youtube tutorial.


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Sep 04, 2012 15:14 |  #17

The sky looks way over-processed. HDR doesn't work for everything and this one would have been better with some basic PP techniques.




  
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Sep 04, 2012 15:24 |  #18

Over done for my tastes. I would try hand-blending using Layer Masks in PS. I would also fix the horizon too. :)


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Sep 04, 2012 15:28 |  #19

I do not have Photoshop, but use Pixelmator which is still a very powerful piece of software.


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Sep 04, 2012 15:40 |  #20

JGunn wrote in post #14947368 (external link)
I appreciate your opinion. Any suggestions?

Don't do HDR. It's a crutch and you don't need it. I find it limits your learning process. If you want to bracket, go ahead and bracket, but don't always run to HDR as the solution because there are far better solutions out there such as filters, etc. I find that the new people to landscapes start to lean on HDR instead of learning exposure better, and that they tend to over-do the HDR processing. I do use HDR myself - but only sometimes and only with purpose and I work hard at making it look natural and not look like typical overprocessed HDR shots. Or I will do it manually by layering and working on particular areas in Photoshop. But mostly these days I am using filters and getting my exposure correct when taking the shot. Then it's easier to pull out a little detail here and there, do a bit of dodging and burning to add some depth and dimension.

You are going to need a tripod for landscapes. I'd suggest against getting a cheap one. You can get a decent one for a few hundred with a head. But don't spend $50 on a whole setup and expect good results.

The photo has some good color, but the composition is lacking. The grass and trees on the left blend together and don't really add a ton to the shot. The sky is nice, but the water looks like the wind was blowing it and I'd like to see it still - nothing you can do about that one but try another day. It could use a good solid foreground subject to help add interest to the photo as well.


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Sep 04, 2012 15:46 |  #21

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Don't do HDR. It's a crutch and you don't need it. I find it limits your learning process. If you want to bracket, go ahead and bracket, but don't always run to HDR as the solution because there are far better solutions out there such as filters, etc. I find that the new people to landscapes start to lean on HDR instead of learning exposure better, and that they tend to over-do the HDR processing. I do use HDR myself - but only sometimes and only with purpose and I work hard at making it look natural and not look like typical overprocessed HDR shots. Or I will do it manually by layering and working on particular areas in Photoshop. But mostly these days I am using filters and getting my exposure correct when taking the shot. Then it's easier to pull out a little detail here and there, do a bit of dodging and burning to add some depth and dimension.

You are going to need a tripod for landscapes. I'd suggest against getting a cheap one. You can get a decent one for a few hundred with a head. But don't spend $50 on a whole setup and expect good results.

The photo has some good color, but the composition is lacking. The grass and trees on the left blend together and don't really add a ton to the shot. The sky is nice, but the water looks like the wind was blowing it and I'd like to see it still - nothing you can do about that one but try another day. It could use a good solid foreground subject to help add interest to the photo as well.

Thanks! Very constructive.
I am looking at the Manfrotto 294 series of tripods with a 3-way head.


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Sep 04, 2012 18:09 |  #22

JGunn wrote in post #14947447 (external link)
I do not have Photoshop, but use Pixelmator which is still a very powerful piece of software.

Not familiar with Pixelmator, but it looks like they offer Layer Masks: http://www.pxm-tuts.com/tutorials/too​ls/layer-masks/ (external link)


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Sep 04, 2012 19:01 |  #23

Hikin Mike wrote in post #14948070 (external link)
Not familiar with Pixelmator, but it looks like they offer Layer Masks: http://www.pxm-tuts.com/tutorials/too​ls/layer-masks/ (external link)

Pixelmator does indeed have layer masks.
I have read through your tutorial on your website and will give a few things a try.

PS: Very impressive photos on your website!


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Sep 05, 2012 00:12 |  #24

JGunn wrote in post #14948255 (external link)
Pixelmator does indeed have layer masks.
I have read through your tutorial on your website and will give a few things a try.

PS: Very impressive photos on your website!

Thanks! :o


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