Thank you all for the replies, i feel much better now - i took about 4-5 shots of each image so i should be able to find one with there eyes open for each (i hope) and i will share more as i edit them out
Pixil Studio wrote in post #14941744
wayy to much street. with such a nice building why not show more if that and less street. also watch your hz lines
I did not want the building tot take away from the subject any more then it had to, The building is Iolani palace and to people in Hawaii is instantly recognizable. (wiki page
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joedlh wrote in post #14941795
It seems to me that those stairs in the background of the group shot gave you the opportunity to shorten the width of the group and get each person a little bigger in the frame. Put the kids on the closest step. Bride and Groom, Maid of Honor on the next step. Brides Maids and ushers last or perhaps on two steps. That would also get the lamp posts away from peoples' heads.
i would of loved to shoot on the steps but its not allowed they are only opened for special cerominies and other then that are chained of with a couple of big signs telling you so - I was also shooting in the grounds without a permit as the state of hawaii has some messed up way of letting you get one ( you cant get one because the state workers have no idea what there doing and just keep redirecting you to other people who also have no clue) So i had to bribe the security guard to let us shoot.