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A HDR photo for critique.

 
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Sep 06, 2012 13:37 |  #1

Please critique thank you :)
Tell me what do you like/don't like about my photograph so that I can learn more.
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Sep 06, 2012 13:50 |  #2

Lovely vista, colors are really nice.


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Sep 06, 2012 13:52 |  #3

Nicely done! Would like to see a wider shot though.




  
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Sep 06, 2012 14:21 |  #4

Very nice image, but I am curious as to why it appears that some of the hills in the background appear to be black and white and others a bright green?


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Sep 06, 2012 14:24 |  #5

I find the homes/buildings distracting. And as they aren't "pretty" homes, they take away from the photo.


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Sep 06, 2012 15:12 |  #6

I like it, I think it's fine.


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Sep 06, 2012 15:35 |  #7

Beautiful colors! I also would have liked to see it a bit wider, but the way it is right now is fine. The HDR processing looks nice, it's not overcooked which I like. I also don't notice any halos, so cudos there! Nice job man!


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Sep 06, 2012 15:38 |  #8

I LOVE the homes and buildings - I think they have a kind of beauty to themselves. Lovely photo!


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Sep 06, 2012 16:39 |  #9

Great shot - like everything about it.




  
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Sep 06, 2012 17:48 |  #10

Much nicer than most HDRs I have seen - they are usually overdone. I too like the buildings contrasting with the nature/geography.


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Sep 06, 2012 21:15 |  #11

Well done HDR


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Sep 06, 2012 22:44 |  #12

Not one thing I dont like. love it. crisp colours and contrast


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Sep 06, 2012 23:38 |  #13

Well done HDR, the fact that it's not overdone makes it much more enjoyable. The composition could be improved in my opinion, by including more of the hazy hills, since they feel more like an afterthought, but everything technical about the photo I like.




  
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Sep 07, 2012 00:37 |  #14

Wow. Thanks for all the compliments and constructive feedback guys. I'm always learning and hope to do better tmr.

My next purchase wld b a 10-22 so tt I can do wider next time.




  
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Sep 07, 2012 03:57 |  #15

Canon 10-22mm = good choice! I love mine. I need to get rid of it as I have gone FF, but I will have trouble getting a FF replacement.


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