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Sep 11, 2012 20:47 |  #1

Hey guys posted this image a while back:

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Sep 11, 2012 20:56 |  #2

Second one looks much more natural, and I like that you got rid of that dead space at the bottom. Imo you could have kept a little more. is this photo about the couple on the bench? That's where my eye is drawn, maybe you could have got a little closer :D


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Sep 11, 2012 20:58 |  #3

I prefer the crop of the 1st, for sure. With the crop on 2, you loose that whole feeling of the low vantage point.

Not sure which I like better for color rendition.


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Sep 11, 2012 20:59 |  #4

Huh.... I didn't even see the couple on the bench until I read gen2roller's post.


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Sep 11, 2012 22:24 |  #5

Yeah. I think the couple should be the "subject" and I think the rule of thirds should really apply here. I keep wanting the shot to be from a LOT closer. Try cropping it tighter. Put the couple into one of the points on a 3x3 grid in the frame. A moon in the upper left would have been nice as well. The lights on the right are a distraction to me.


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