Hey guys posted this image a while back:
IMG_0855
Now that I have a trial of light room here is a new edit:
IMAGE LINK: http://www.flickr.com/photos/bennymod/7978266411/
Two worlds
Thoughts?
Sep 11, 2012 20:47 | #1 Hey guys posted this image a while back: IMG_0855 Now that I have a trial of light room here is a new edit: IMAGE LINK: http://www.flickr.com/photos/bennymod/7978266411/ Two worlds Thoughts?
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gen2roller Senior Member 380 posts Joined Oct 2011 More info | Sep 11, 2012 20:56 | #2 Second one looks much more natural, and I like that you got rid of that dead space at the bottom. Imo you could have kept a little more. is this photo about the couple on the bench? That's where my eye is drawn, maybe you could have got a little closer 7D Gripped | 5D MKII Gripped |Canon 50mm f/1.4 | 70-200L f/2.8 IS II | 16-35L f/2.8 II | Opteka 6.5mm Fisheye | Cybersyncs and Vivitars
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KirkS518 Goldmember 3,983 posts Likes: 24 Joined Apr 2012 Location: Central Gulf Coast, Flori-duh More info | Sep 11, 2012 20:58 | #3 I prefer the crop of the 1st, for sure. With the crop on 2, you loose that whole feeling of the low vantage point. If steroids are illegal for athletes, should PS be illegal for models?
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KirkS518 Goldmember 3,983 posts Likes: 24 Joined Apr 2012 Location: Central Gulf Coast, Flori-duh More info | Sep 11, 2012 20:59 | #4 Huh.... I didn't even see the couple on the bench until I read gen2roller's post. If steroids are illegal for athletes, should PS be illegal for models?
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kfreels Goldmember 4,297 posts Likes: 11 Joined Aug 2010 Location: Princeton, IN More info | Sep 11, 2012 22:24 | #5 Yeah. I think the couple should be the "subject" and I think the rule of thirds should really apply here. I keep wanting the shot to be from a LOT closer. Try cropping it tighter. Put the couple into one of the points on a 3x3 grid in the frame. A moon in the upper left would have been nice as well. The lights on the right are a distraction to me. I am serious....and don't call me Shirley.
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