My niece

I was asked to shoot senior pictures for my niece recently. It has been quite some time............here is one from her session:

I don't like the shadow centering on her body, and I really don't like the eyes closed.

very nice shot, excellent tonality and composition, nice pose

thank you for the feedback.

I like everything about the shot, EXCEPT for the fact that it seems slightly too dark, but ever-so-slightly.

ty Plumgoo. I actually found it a tad dark myself and adjusted it w/out reposting.

Gotta have the eyes open, gotta.

HappySnapper90 wrote in post #14992940
Gotta have the eyes open, gotta.

as much as I agree with this, and perhaps this image would work better if so, I felt that at that moment, as she closed her eyes to feel the soft warm breeze, she was quite peaceful. That is what I wanted to portray.

1downfall wrote in post #15004308
as she closed her eyes to feel the soft warm breeze, she was quite peaceful. That is what I wanted to portray.

That's the feeling I got from it

I like this. Good feeling. Eyes open are not a problem here unless every single other shot has her eyes closed--somehow I doubt this is the case !

1downfall wrote in post #15004308
as much as I agree with this, and perhaps this image would work better if so, I felt that at that moment, as she closed her eyes to feel the soft warm breeze, she was quite peaceful. That is what I wanted to portray.

Hmm, but what would someone think looking at the photos in 20 years?

IMO it is spoilt by closed eyes......

Nice image but the closed eyes takes away from it