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Sep 25, 2012 02:45 |  #1

Had an idea for a shot, but need suggestions on improving it. Cheers

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Sep 25, 2012 03:04 |  #2

Cross light from the rear/sides to shape the exterior of the glass.


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Sep 25, 2012 03:23 |  #3

It looks cut-off at top and bottom, I would try a smaller flame and show the top of it and the bottom of the glass. Experiment with a bit more lighting - possibly from behind.


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Sep 25, 2012 09:47 |  #4

It wild be awesome if you could see the whole flame and more of the outline of the glass


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Sep 25, 2012 14:15 |  #5

Thanks LBaldwin, Martin Dixon and Genedarrell. I see what you mean. Cheers.




  
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