Watermark help

First off, be gentle I'm not a "from-scratch" artist. I'm trying to make a decent watermark and just need some opinions. My lack of creativity in this area is making it difficult. I made these 2 today and not sure how else to do make it.

1. I want it relatively thin to be at the bottom of the page
2. I'm trying to stay away from all of the words on the same line

Any comments, likes or dislikes, suggestions? Someday I'd like to make a logo, but that's a bit over my head right now.

I like it but is too big.

The second one is better, seperation of Adam and Paris in the first may infer the city of paris, paris imagery. Maybe try to capitalize your name if it looks ok that way

I think I like the 2nd one better as well, but I think the lines take away from my name, which I guess it OK.

And this is going to be my main watermark on Zenfolio, but I can't find a way to resize it on their page yet...

Can go sans any lines perhaps

#2, but can you show us a sample of it on a full sized image (i.e. what the end result would look like?)