Heres two of my recent pictures of my heep from up in the mountains.
Im afraid that the Jeep is too dark in the first picture, however I like how the second pic turned out a bit more. What do you guys think?
Jeep450r Hatchling 2 posts Joined Sep 2012 More info | Sep 25, 2012 17:41 | #1 Heres two of my recent pictures of my heep from up in the mountains. Im afraid that the Jeep is too dark in the first picture, however I like how the second pic turned out a bit more. What do you guys think?
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JeremyBlake Senior Member 532 posts Likes: 4 Joined Aug 2012 Location: Columbus, OH, USA More info | Sep 25, 2012 21:44 | #2 |
stanclark Goldmember 1,143 posts Likes: 6 Joined Jan 2012 Location: Windsor,California More info | Sep 25, 2012 23:42 | #3 so lighten the picture.... So if God made Man & Woman....whats his excuse for Nikon...
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TomReichner "That's what I do." 17,636 posts Gallery: 213 photos Best ofs: 2 Likes: 8390 Joined Dec 2008 Location: from Pennsylvania, USA, now in Washington state, USA, road trip back and forth a lot More info | Sep 26, 2012 01:29 | #4 The 2nd image is nice; moreso than the first, as I prefer the look of having the Jeep larger in the frame. Have you tried getting the Jeep even larger in the frame by physically moving closer to it? "Your" and "you're" are different words with completely different meanings - please use the correct one.
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StayFrosty Senior Member 407 posts Likes: 6 Joined Aug 2012 Location: UK More info | Sep 26, 2012 05:49 | #5 |
Hannya Goldmember 1,062 posts Likes: 66 Joined Apr 2008 Location: UK More info | Sep 26, 2012 09:59 | #6 Hi. In the first one, the scene would look so much better without the vehicle. in the second, it looks like its about to fall off into the abyss. I think the front end would be more attractive than its rear. Look at ads for automotive pics for inspiration. I don't think these are quite 'there' yet. “Your first 10,000 photographs are your worst.” ― Henri Cartier-Bresson
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johnward82 Member 147 posts Joined Oct 2009 Location: Texas More info | Sep 26, 2012 13:03 | #7 Maybe its just from my offroading days... but I love the second one.
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Hutchdesigns Member 165 posts Joined Jan 2011 Location: Middle Tennessee More info | Sep 26, 2012 13:52 | #8 Cool pics but you have dust on your sensor. Canon 60D/20D and a few lenses.
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Sep 26, 2012 14:07 | #9 I think the 'poses' of the subject look too contrived (particularly in shot 2, and this is just my opinion). The jeep in the 2nd shot was driven with the front wheel up on a 3' tall rock. But it looks as if the driver could have gone a foot to the right and saved the trouble (although it looks like a nice spot to get underneath and change the oil). It makes it a little obvious that the jeep isn't actually going anywhere. In your other thread asking about processing, the position of the jeep looks much more believable, and I like that it has a driver. I do like the processing and scenery in both of these shots. Fuji XT-3, 18-55 F2-4, 10-24mm, 100-400mm.
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Albertonman Senior Member 419 posts Likes: 1 Joined Sep 2010 More info | Sep 26, 2012 15:47 | #10 I totally agree with Hannya, I am not mad about the composition on the last one! I think it would have been a stronger image if the jeep was facing us on the right at an angle, the way its at is not very interesting except that it looks like its gonna go off the cliff!
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