Bill & Diane

Here are a few shots from a wedding I shot recenty. This is my second attempt. I think the pictures came out well. These were shot with a 5d3, 7d, 450d with a 700-200L, 24-70L, 35L, 10-22 and maybe something else. All natural light.

C&C please:

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very nice Andrew, who is that in #4 with the big white lens?

1-lighting is harsh. looks like on-cam flash to me given the shadow. I'm not sure what I'm supposed to do with this one. Is it a funny photo ? or an odd moment.

2-good

3-good-would be nice without the officiant, but there's just not much we can do here. I got a tip last wedding from the officiant who said that I should ask officiants if they wouldn't mind moving for the kiss shot. She suggested most would like the idea.

4-crop above photographer in the frame. Meta shots are cool to include, but perhaps not when it emphasizes the emptiness of the church and their wedding.

5-I can't swear by this, but it looks to me like a flash + ambient shot in which the ambient (tungsten) portion was blowing out a little. Ease off on the exposure and go cooler with the color balance--or go B+W.

6-Are you the main photographer ? Even if you aren't the guests seem to be looking at you, suggesting that this was set up in some way. Why not spend 2 minutes moving people (or asking them to move) to avoid completely preventable decapitation problems as that which occurs in the upper right of the photo ? Take care not to be so passive.

7-I would like more depth of field.

8-oddly cropped / framed, judging by the space on the right 1/4 of the image.

looks a little orange red to me. i dont get the first shot. you chopped the dudes head off in the group shot. and id edit out that other photogrpaher

nicely done

Nice set! They seem fun!

Nice and elegant

Like your set, but dont like number 6, try not to center so much all your images.

Starving and that food shot ..