Arielle #2 CC Needed

Hi, I went out and followed the advice of many forum goers on here and shot my portraits straight head on instead of bottom down. Thanks again to those that gave me that advice as I can see what they mean now. I'd like some C&C on these photos that I took yesterday, again, her skin might seem overexposed but she has very, very (porcelain) light skin tone so plase try to stray away from crituqing flash exposure as I'm looking for more over critque of composition. Thanks and all the best.

Old post was here:

https://photography-on-the.net …p?p=15043122#po​st15043122

Is there an obvious improvement with these photos vs those? Thanks.

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