I really like this, but what do you guys say? Is there anything to this?
I tried for a sexy, fashion look...
russ71satellite Goldmember  More info | Oct 06, 2012 22:34 | #1 I really like this, but what do you guys say? Is there anything to this? Canon EOS 5D, 85mm 1.8, 50mm 1.8, Yongnuo YN560II, Dynaphos strobe, 16 inch beauty dish, Vagabond mini.
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KirkS518 Goldmember  3,983 posts Likes: 24 Joined Apr 2012 Location: Central Gulf Coast, Flori-duh More info | Oct 06, 2012 22:52 | #2 Well, since you asked.... If steroids are illegal for athletes, should PS be illegal for models?
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emelvee Goldmember  1,871 posts Joined Apr 2009 Location: E-town, Canada More info | Oct 06, 2012 23:08 | #3 The skin looks a little funny to me ... the lighting is very flat and I'd like to see more depth of field or more of her. Canon RP | Canon 6D | 70-200 f/2.8 I | 50mm f/1.4 | 16-35mm f/2.8 II | 580EX II x 2
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rivas8409 Goldmember  2,500 posts Likes: 586 Joined Mar 2011 Location: Lemoore, California More info | Oct 07, 2012 15:19 | #4 It's a snap shot of white boots. I don't see it as any more than that. Body: Canon 5DmkII│Canon M50
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BrainMechanic Goldmember  3,526 posts Likes: 19 Joined Apr 2010 More info | Oct 07, 2012 15:21 | #5  Permanent banNot good. Gear: a toothed wheel
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samsen Cream of the Crop  7,468 posts Likes: 239 Joined Apr 2006 Location: LA More info | Oct 07, 2012 15:23 | #6 There is buyer for any material but when a material sells fast, it talks for itself and what is behind it. Weak retaliates,
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Oct 07, 2012 19:29 | #7 KirkS518 wrote in post #15089108  Well, since you asked.... First question is - is this supposed to be viewed at this angle? Sexy - No, can't say it invokes any 'sexy' emotion, and for some reason, I get the dfeeling the model is under 18 years old, so , definitely not sexy Fashion - the shoes are dirty General - hands/bracelet seem very soft to me, composition is awkward, concrete is unattractive, and the crack is distracting/annoying. Sorry, I don't see it as a keeper. Thanks for the CC. As a beginner, I'm still working on learning what is and isn't good. For the record though, the model is my 42 y.o. wife. I wouldn't take such an image of anyone under 18. I did oversoften the skin...I see what you are saying. Canon EOS 5D, 85mm 1.8, 50mm 1.8, Yongnuo YN560II, Dynaphos strobe, 16 inch beauty dish, Vagabond mini.
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Oct 07, 2012 19:31 | #8 Thanks to all for the CC! Canon EOS 5D, 85mm 1.8, 50mm 1.8, Yongnuo YN560II, Dynaphos strobe, 16 inch beauty dish, Vagabond mini.
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enrigonz Goldmember  1,637 posts Likes: 10 Joined Dec 2009 Location: Miami, FL More info | Oct 07, 2012 19:37 | #9 Perhaps a profile shot of the legs if that's what you're shooting would have been better. Something with a blurred background in the outdoors. The potential is there for making it better, just keep shooting, shoot in all different angles but rule of thumb (not always THE rule but helps) is shoot the subject, in this case your wife's legs at eye level, this means getting down on your knees or even laying down on your stomach. Canon Stuff
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Oct 07, 2012 20:51 | #10 enrigonz wrote in post #15092104 Perhaps a profile shot of the legs if that's what you're shooting would have been better. Something with a blurred background in the outdoors. The potential is there for making it better, just keep shooting, shoot in all different angles but rule of thumb (not always THE rule but helps) is shoot the subject, in this case your wife's legs at eye level, this means getting down on your knees or even laying down on your stomach. Just keep shooting, don't stop at the first try! Will do, and thanks for the CC. Canon EOS 5D, 85mm 1.8, 50mm 1.8, Yongnuo YN560II, Dynaphos strobe, 16 inch beauty dish, Vagabond mini.
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GorgeShooter Goldmember  1,422 posts Joined Mar 2009 Location: Oregon More info | Oct 07, 2012 23:19 | #11 Photos should tell a story. Are you trying to make the viewer contemplate what's going on with this person? Something else? The problem I have with this photo is that the "story" could be one of MANY things and I'm left guessing what it could be. Like others said....keep trying...you'll get there. 1DX | 5D MkII (gripped)
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Oct 08, 2012 18:47 | #12 Thanks for the insight, Gorge... Canon EOS 5D, 85mm 1.8, 50mm 1.8, Yongnuo YN560II, Dynaphos strobe, 16 inch beauty dish, Vagabond mini.
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BryanJonathan Member 35 posts Joined Oct 2012 Location: Duluth, MN More info | Oct 08, 2012 20:42 | #13 If you have to ask . . . . . . Bryan Jonathan Weddings - Wedding Photographer - Duluth, MN
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Oct 09, 2012 21:13 | #14 needs more legs Gear List- 7D (gripped), 100-400 4.5-5.6 L, 70-200 2.8 L IS II 85 1.8, Sigma 17-50 2.8, 430exII Website- http://daviddoylephotography.zenfolio.com/
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stillinamerica Goldmember 1,275 posts Joined Oct 2009 Location: Alabama More info | Oct 10, 2012 19:01 | #15 Nope. Sorry. Maybe as part of a set I images [CENTER]My Facebook
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