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Oct 08, 2012 16:06 |  #1

Let me know what you think of this one.

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Oct 08, 2012 16:52 |  #2

I like the image good work :)




  
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Oct 08, 2012 16:57 |  #3

Great image but not a fan of the mile of extra space on the top. just my 2 cents ..great work




  
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Oct 08, 2012 18:03 |  #4

Thank you both!

Nickc84, I will try a better composition next time!


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Oct 08, 2012 18:19 |  #5

Too much dead space up top. Why the tilt? What does it look like without the building falling over? Looks like a buick SUV back there, distracting.


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Oct 08, 2012 21:53 |  #6

Did you think of the rule of thirds when you processed the image? You need to straighten the image and crop it. It'll be much more effective...and attractive...JMHO




  
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Oct 08, 2012 22:13 |  #7

Nickc84 wrote in post #15095752 (external link)
Great image but not a fan of the mile of extra space on the top. just my 2 cents ..great work

Partially agree, but I guess if he cropped it closer there would not be that sunflaremagiggy which I kinda like

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Too much dead space up top. Why the tilt? What does it look like without the building falling over? Looks like a buick SUV back there, distracting.

Did not notice the SUV until you mentioned it, so I would question the distraction factor of it... And the tilt was the first thing that I liked about it:)) probably because it feels like the girl is laying on the wall more than just leaning against it!

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Did you think of the rule of thirds when you processed the image? You need to straighten the image and crop it. It'll be much more effective...and attractive...JMHO

If he will straighten and crop it it will turn into one of the millions of average images. Not every photo must be composed by the rule of thirds, or any other rule for that matter... at least that is my opinion:)))


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Oct 08, 2012 23:07 |  #8

Girl area is great. SUV area, not so great.


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Oct 09, 2012 00:15 |  #9

I kind of like the tilt but the space up top detracts and the SUV is really distracting for me.


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