Photos for class, any advice/tips?

Few shots of my girlfriend yesterday.

Very pretty model! However, Im not a fan of the crop in #2. I would like to see more space to her left..just my 2cents.

I have (3) pieces of advice:

1) since you are hosting pics on flickr, just click the "share" button above the photo and grab the BBCode for the images and embed them in your post. Then you can put up to 8 in a post.

2) don't leave your lens on a narrow rail next to the water!

3) Don't burry your lead. The two images on you linked to come across as stronger images and are nicely done.

The lens on the edge in #2 really freaks me out. All I can think about in that picture is that it is an accident waiting to happen.

No worries guys, it's a Nikon mug

Crvfty wrote in post #15104615
No worries guys, it's a Nikon mug

In that case, go ahead and throw it over

I was thinking about the lense on the rail too.. IMHO the 1st linked photo is my favorite.

Don't really like the crop in either of these. The model looks very 'uncomfortable' in #2. The first linked photo is the best. Pretty model.