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Oct 13, 2012 08:52 |  #1

Just looking for some C&C on this shot/pp! Thanks!

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Oct 13, 2012 09:31 |  #2

!st of all she's a real cutie! What a great little model you have! Overall I love the crisp feel to this shot, the white balance is a bit on the cool side. Also try not to center your subject, it makes for a better composition to practice the rule of 3rds.




  
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Oct 13, 2012 11:40 as a reply to  @ Chet's post |  #3

Very cute! and crisp photo.




  
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Oct 13, 2012 12:38 |  #4

I think in this case centered subject works fine. I think its because of her expression, which leaves no doubt that she's the star of this show! There's not one thing I find wrong with this photo. Very cute, and nice and sharp.


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Oct 13, 2012 13:19 |  #5

I agree with ddk632, it's clear who is the star in this photograph so to heck with the "rule of 3rds"! :)


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Oct 13, 2012 14:16 |  #6

Very nicely done.


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Oct 13, 2012 21:20 |  #7

Exposure looks good but WB is a bit cool.

As to composition - it's not so much about who is the star as to what's pleasing to the eye. She's too centered and would look better a bit off to one side - rule of thirds.

Additionally, if she is supposed to be the center of attention I would want more of here and less of the surroundings - as interesting as they are.


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Oct 14, 2012 16:19 |  #8

she needs to "pop" more. her colors blend into the wood to much.

What a beautiful smile.


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Oct 14, 2012 16:39 |  #9

Titus213 wrote in post #15118843 (external link)
Exposure looks good but WB is a bit cool.

As to composition - it's not so much about who is the star as to what's pleasing to the eye. She's too centered and would look better a bit off to one side - rule of thirds.

Additionally, if she is supposed to be the center of attention I would want more of here and less of the surroundings - as interesting as they are.

Agree with Dave,she is so cute!


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