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Dec 29, 2005 04:38 | #1

Hi,

I ventured down to Wexford Town on Christmas Eve hoping to get some sunrise shots. The weather didn't cooperate so I tried to make the most of it. This is one of the two shots I took:

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GyRob

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Dec 29, 2005 05:05 | #2

nice shot i like it and the stillness /isolation you have captured.
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Dec 30, 2005 09:50 | #5

Great shot I like every part of it. One, niggle, the bottom left corner seems somehow incomplete ...

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Dec 30, 2005 19:55 | #6

Beautiful monochrome.

Of course, the exposure and placement of values and compostion and chiaroscuro are all perfect. What really gets me though in this image is the soft glow. Very difficult to achieve, but you got there. Amazing how the famous "S" curve keeps coming up as a powerful compositional effect. I must remember to add that to my paper on "The Essentials of Composition".
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Dec 30, 2005 20:02 | #7

Excellent.

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Dec 30, 2005 22:02 | #8

I love this shot. I hope you captured it at a high enough resolution to blow it up to at least a 20x30 for your wall. It will entrance the viewer at eye level at that size.

Awesome.

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Dec 31, 2005 02:50 | #9

Thank you all got your kind comments!

Happy new year!

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Dec 31, 2005 12:44 | #10

I like this one very much indeed and the "stillness" effect comes accross real well. But I think I would like to see a more clearly identified horizon.

Happy New Year to all in Kildare from a Laois man.

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