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Oct 16, 2012 07:55 |  #1

How is the pp on this one? too much?

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Oct 16, 2012 08:08 |  #2

a little to dark


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Oct 16, 2012 08:16 |  #3

Yea...I think you were going for a look of the fog rolling over the hills in the background but it doesn't look right. You need to brighten up the sky and water (in the background) just a tad. I'd also play with the foreground a bit too. The lighting on the yellow bush in the front doesn't look quite right either. I see you have the "image editing OK" thingy, I'd play with it a re-post but I don't have any decent image editing software on my work laptop.




  
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Oct 16, 2012 08:29 |  #4

Thanks guys. It was edited dark intentionally but I guess it's not working. I appreciate the feedback.




  
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Oct 16, 2012 21:33 |  #5

I like the dark edit, but I do think you should selectively bring down the exposure a bit on the yellow flowers and the green-ish section of the water.


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Oct 17, 2012 07:09 as a reply to  @ MMp's post |  #6

I like it pretty much as is but I would fix the halo around the mountains.


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Oct 17, 2012 07:49 as a reply to  @ saea501's post |  #7

I can see where you were trying to go, and I like it.
But the lighting of the shore/cliffs does not work with the rest of the image.
I love the shore/cliffs lighting, so maybe try to bring the darker areas up a tad.


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Oct 17, 2012 08:57 |  #8

pbelarge wrote in post #15133218 (external link)
I can see where you were trying to go, and I like it.
But the lighting of the shore/cliffs does not work with the rest of the image.
I love the shore/cliffs lighting, so maybe try to bring the darker areas up a tad.

That's interesting.....that's exactly what makes this shot for me....that contrast.


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