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Oct 16, 2012 11:23 |  #1

Looking for some feedback on this shot from a recent shoot! Thanks peeps!

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Oct 16, 2012 12:05 |  #2

Nice shot. Minor nit would be the bra strap.


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Oct 16, 2012 13:24 |  #3

It's solid but needs some post work. It's also a teeny bit underexposed.


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Oct 16, 2012 13:29 |  #4

Nice shot...agree with the above.

Are her lips that full or is she duck-facing it? Not a fan of duck face.


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Oct 16, 2012 16:19 |  #5

I like the pose and the DOF of the shot. If I picked about anything maybe a little brighter eyes.


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Oct 16, 2012 17:00 |  #6

It looks a little flat. You can easily make it better with post.


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Oct 16, 2012 17:19 |  #7

01Ryan10 wrote in post #15130921 (external link)
It looks a little flat. You can easily make it better with post.

I agree with this assesment. If you have photoshop, take and use the curves and improve the contrast for starters. Taking and moving the shadows/highlights sliders in just abit gives it more pop right away.


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Oct 16, 2012 17:58 |  #8

I really like the shot, a little more contrast would look good I think


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Oct 16, 2012 18:01 |  #9

Jarhed27 wrote in post #15129880 (external link)
Nice shot. Minor nit would be the bra strap.

I agree... Don't gals were strapless bras anymore?


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Oct 16, 2012 18:13 as a reply to  @ RPCrowe's post |  #10

first thing i noticed was the bra strap. and i dont usually EVER see little things like that...

EVERYTHING on my computer looks flat so i wont chime in on this one at all...

otherwise i like it...


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Oct 17, 2012 09:28 |  #11

Some PP would do this wonders...


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Oct 18, 2012 07:21 |  #12

Hey guys!

Thanks so much for the feedback! Helps alot! I always find when I post images on this forum they look a little underexposed in comparision to when I view them on my computer. Is there anyway to avoid that?! The bra strap annoys me too - but I tried to photoshop it out and it ended up looking really cheesy - I'm not the best with photoshop! I will play with the contrast and shadows. :)


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Oct 18, 2012 13:00 |  #13

Just clone stamp the bra strap. Unfortunately, that takes crazy amount of patience.


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Oct 18, 2012 13:18 |  #14

Looks a bit soft and noisy for the gear you have listed.

Looks like it came from a rebel.




  
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Oct 18, 2012 13:20 |  #15

MaiganCowen wrote in post #15137644 (external link)
Hey guys!

Thanks so much for the feedback! Helps alot! I always find when I post images on this forum they look a little underexposed in comparision to when I view them on my computer. Is there anyway to avoid that?! The bra strap annoys me too - but I tried to photoshop it out and it ended up looking really cheesy - I'm not the best with photoshop! I will play with the contrast and shadows. :)

Maybe (Export to web) instead of just save in PS


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