The Miller Family

Here is my first family portrait. Let me know your thoughts, please!

The WB is off looks like they may be squinting and it is lacking detail in their faces. The M is way to distracting. Overall it just looks soft and the colors look muddy.

Great Shot!

I do like the idea, it does look a little on te cool side to me. Nice though

They all have great expressions, that's nice. I agree, it's pretty cool and there doesn't seem to be great light in their eyes. The M is not really my taste, but if I was going to do it then I'd have the family more interacting in the background with the focus on the M versus trying to focus BOTH on the family and the M.

Beautiful.

nice natural expressions

image is way to busy , visually.
under exposed , white balance is very cold . and its cropped into a shape that is very very awkward to print. looks out of focus too . sorry ,
you had a nice family there and their placement was great. get closer to the ground , lose the letter, and try again .