Well, i think i 'm terrible at compositions. starting to learn the art.
It was a random shot, then i cropped it n i think it looks interesting now
Just critique this one please
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Oct 21, 2012 04:45 | #1 Well, i think i 'm terrible at compositions. starting to learn the art. IMG_2182x
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Oct 21, 2012 07:54 | #2 Composition seems fine...but the dynamic range of the image leaves something to be desired. Reflections are blown and I'm unable to discern much of the boatsman. The things you do for yourself die with you, the things you do for others live forever.
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alquimista Cream of the Crop More info | Oct 21, 2012 08:05 | #3 chauncey wrote in post #15149358 Composition seems fine...but the dynamic range of the image leaves something to be desired. Reflections are blown and I'm unable to discern much of the boatsman. +1 perhaps go back in PP and fix the range la costura de Dios
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johndoorley Senior Member 364 posts Likes: 3 Joined Jan 2011 More info | Oct 21, 2012 08:59 | #4 I look at the photo and see too much that does not add to the photo. The water in the distance adds nothing to my eye.
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GorgeShooter Goldmember 1,422 posts Joined Mar 2009 Location: Oregon More info | Oct 21, 2012 11:15 | #5 I would crop out the bright water in the top of the comp and try and bring out some details in the darks with the boat and person. 1DX | 5D MkII (gripped)
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Oct 23, 2012 23:45 | #6 In this particular shot I am more used to the boat operator being at the back of the boat and that makes this boat appear to be leaving the frame, rather than entering. Upon closer examination I see that the pointy end of the boat is indeed facing in to the right but this is creating conflict in my brain, I want to like the overall composition but I just can't. Dave
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Oct 24, 2012 04:18 | #7 ChunkyDA wrote in post #15161804 In this particular shot I am more used to the boat operator being at the back of the boat and that makes this boat appear to be leaving the frame, rather than entering. Upon closer examination I see that the pointy end of the boat is indeed facing in to the right but this is creating conflict in my brain, I want to like the overall composition but I just can't. look up these terms for composition help: fibonacci golden ratio photography rule of thirds balancing elements leading lines symmetry and patterns lastly, there is nothing wrong with experimentation and breaking rules. thanks very much for analysis. i ll try to learn all of the stuff u hv mention.
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