Quick shoot outside

Hey guys,
This is the first time i got to use two flashes for a portrait and i'd really like to get some feedback on what could be improved

Ok, so this is how it went - the girl is my wife. She's an auto journalist and was testing this Mercedes GLK for some reason. She asked me to take a picture of her in front of the car. The problem is it was already pitch black outside so i had to figure out the lighting. So two speedlights were used. The main one was used with a silver reflective umbrella and the rim light is bare.

I like how she looks on the first shot the most even if the light is a bit harsh and rim light is bit intesive but I'm so subjective, since she's my wife but she chose the second shot as her favorite. I moved her away from the car to get some separation on the third shot only. It was freezing already so it kind of shows on her face but i still like the way the car becomes background rather than one of the/part of the subject.

The Merc badge in all of them is covered intentionally.

The pictures (flickr sharpenned):

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I like these, maybe clone out the glare of the rim in the upper left to hide it.

If I had to choose one as my fav,I choose the last one. The BW conversion is really nice. I do agree with Jarhed though,gid rid of the glare. Seems like you had your light too close.

like 2 and 3 best, too many distractions on the hood/window in 1

Thanks for the feedback guys! I'll remove the glare and see how it looks like. Didn't try that option yet